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Sinners - your favorite Sin's tale

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Sinners - your favorite Sin's tale

not-so-short story inspired from Sins of a Solar Empire

from Stardock Forums

Sinners

 

***Sinners has been discontinued. See last page for details.***

 

Sinners is currently (as of Febuary 15)...172 pages!

Part 2 HAS BEGUN! Here's the teaser for those of you who haven't seen it yet, or would like to be reminded of what's to come.

Part 2: Destruction

Teaser

 

 

Kol:

captured by the vicious Mani'k, can Kol escape from the Vasari before he himself is turned into one of the Vasari? And even if he can manage to escape, the Guild of Marksmen is out there, looking for him...

Archie:

Sent back to his home planet to solve a streak of murders committed by a close friend, will he join the murderer? Or will he pay the ultimate sacrifice?

Zeke:

Forever battling for control of his body, Zeke's psionic powers are growing stronger, and Alfr'eda is growing frightened. Can a Silent One rejoin the Unity? What would that mean for her? In the meantime, there are Sinners to purge. But her next target may be the most difficult and dangerous yet....The Prime Chancellor himself.

Jessica:

After the great Admiral Kol mysteriously disappears, Jessica steps up to pick up the empty seat of power. But others want the coveted Admiral position as well, and they will stop at nothing to get it. Does the "female Kol" have what it takes to reach Admiralty without the powers of a Marksman? Or will she just be a listing in the number of dead as the contestants fight to the death--for some of them--literally?

Veronica:

Her power taken away "indefinitely" by Haiti, she is forced to hide herself as one of the Vasari's Mani'k. Will her loyalty to the Unity remain strong enough to do what she must with the human prisoner? Or will she help Kol escape to rebel against Haiti in the only pitiful, desperate way she can? And if she aides the terran, will Kol return the sympathy or will he himself capture her?

Agent Karridan:

An Advent spy sent to the Trader worlds to discreetly scout out psionically-active humans that could be spared the destruction of the Reemergence, he hears rumors of a mysterious and deadly killer, and finds himself strangely intrigued. Sneaking into a recent crime scene, Karridan notices a faint psionic residue, and immediately stashes himself in Archie Kol's team as they hunt the murderer. The resulting explosion when he comes into contact with Zeke and Alfr'eda? A thousand suns undergoing supernova will not compare.

Professor Newman:

Working himself near to exhaustion, trying furiously to complete his project before command shuts him down, Newman is running out of time. For himself and for the TEC. Will he succeed? Welcome to the Novalith Project.

Sinners on Blogspot:

http://cisinners.blogspot.com/

 

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Reply #501 from Stardock Forums Top

So i'd like everyone who's still reading this to leave a comment. Has Sinners finally run out? Does no one read it anymore? If not a lot of people comment....i might just stop writing. I do have my other book that needs to get written, after all.

Reply #502 from Sins Forums Top

good story.  Been following it for a while.  Sins is kinda on the downswing here lately...

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Reply #503 from Sins Forums Top

i'm still here, just been busy with schoolwork and college apps (fun!). i'll read your new part sometime today

perhaps when diplomacy comes out, there will be a rebirth

Reply #504 from Stardock Forums Top

hopefully :|

but dont forget! its 2 new chapters, not one.

Reply #505 from Stardock Forums Top

To maybe get a few more people, I'm going to start a blog for Sinners, which can be found HERE.

I haven't gotten around to posting the chapters yet, but I have the best (you can't even try and argue that with me) background title picture. Just go ahead and check it out, maybe become a follower so you get the new posts. I'll still post here on the forums, but its always nice to get an email saying I've added something new instead of having to check every couple of days. At least I think its more handy. (that you can argue with me)

So again, go to http://cisinners.blogspot.com/, the link above is the same, and view (for now) the awesome title background picture I selected for Sinners. I'll start adding in the chapters later today, but no new chapters will appear until later this week.

Reply #506 from Sins Forums Top

Pretty good overall. Also, do you have a link to the complete story?

Reply #507 from Stardock Forums Top

This is the complete story so far. Do you mean one giant thing without comments separating them? No. The blog should meet that need, though. It'll be easy to just click on the chapter you want from the navigation bar on the side.

Reply #508 from Sins Forums Top

excellent work, those last two chapters. some of the dialogue needs a bit of work, but it was very good

Reply #509 from Stardock Forums Top

Quoting eoncommander, reply 508
excellent work, those last two chapters. some of the dialogue needs a bit of work, but it was very good
End of eoncommander's quote

its on my to-do list. after finishing the advent intro. and redoing the vasari intro. and the point when the Trade Order sanctions the creation of the TEC. i think its after that.

Reply #510 from Stardock Forums Top

There is a new Advent introduction part! It is Chapter 3, part 1: She Stays With Us. You can find it at this link: https://forums.stardock.com/331326/get;2058087

but if that link doesn't work, it is on the second page of this thread. Scroll down and it'll be right there. It can also be found at the new Sinners blog at cisinners.blogspot.com

Reply #511 from Sins Forums Top

I don't see much of Professor Newman lol. Do you have anything on him?

Reply #512 from Stardock Forums Top

Oh he's all the way at the end of part 2. At least for now that's his planned introduction point. Unless anything changes, he'll be a major character in the climax ending leading onto part 3 ^_^

Reply #513 from Sins Forums Top

excellent. it was really good. two questions though. what was with the bit about the cavern? and how come th boy wasnt frozen with the rest of the crew?

Reply #514 from Stardock Forums Top

Quoting eoncommander, reply 513
excellent. it was really good. two questions though. what was with the bit about the cavern? and how come th boy wasnt frozen with the rest of the crew?
End of eoncommander's quote

The cavern - a little haha! moment to the reader, where they know the advent's powers but the character doesn't.

The boy - we don't know. maybe just an oversight. maybe not. only time will tell.

Reply #515 from Stardock Forums Top

Ok! I'm starting a blog promotion campaign. If you start following the Sins blog (link at top) in the next 48 hours, your username will most likely appear in Sinners somewhere! (as a character, company, or capital ship, depending on your name). So act now! Start following the Sins blog and become part of the story!

(also, only 3 days left until the Sinners picture poll closes! check the blog for more details)

EDIT: and when I said 3 days, its actually only 2. hurry hurry!

Reply #516 from Sins Forums Top

The cavern - a little haha! moment to the reader, where they know the advent's powers but the character doesn't.
End of quote

yea, but i didnt get it. maybe i'm just being an idiot, but could you please explain?

edit: i got the part about surprise, so i understood what you were trying to do, but i didnt get it here

Reply #517 from Sins Forums Top

Quoting C.I., reply 515
Ok! I'm starting a blog promotion campaign. If you start following the Sins blog (link at top) in the next 48 hours, your username will most likely appear in Sinners somewhere! (as a character, company, or capital ship, depending on your name). So act now! Start following the Sins blog and become part of the story!

(also, only 3 days left until the Sinners picture poll closes! check the blog for more details)

EDIT: and when I said 3 days, its actually only 2. hurry hurry!
End of C.I.'s quote

how bout a title? cause thats kind of what i envisioned when i made my name. you know, emperor of the universe, lord of all domains, the eon commander, etc.

don't listen to me though, do whatever you want to do with it. might be cool as a ship name

Reply #518 from Stardock Forums Top

Commander Eon of one of the many rebel forces against the TEC?

EDIT: but u hav to start following my blog first! That's the only rule. The links up at the top, but I'll put it here again.

http://cisinners.blogspot.com/

Reply #519 from Sins Forums Top

Cool blog! (a character for me please!)

(for the TEC not against it)

Reply #520 from Sins Forums Top

following

Reply #521 from Sins Forums Top

i did that before i posted

Reply #522 from Stardock Forums Top

Are you sure its the Sinners blog, not this thread? I hav two people currently following the Sinners blog. CrusaderScott and a man with a name starting with Cesar (guessing its a different name than their forum username). I've already sent a message to him. But if you say you're following the blog and you are not Crusader or Cesar, then something didn't work.

Again, here's the Sinners blog link: http://cisinners.blogspot.com

Reply #523 from Stardock Forums Top

If you look to the top under the title Sinners on Blogspot, you'll see I started a list of those who are following and becoming part of the story. Make sure if you follow that you're checking the public box! Doesn't help me if you're privately following, I can't tell that.

Reply #524 from Sins Forums Top

i think thats what i did, actually. i'll go fix that

Reply #525 from Stardock Forums Top

Eon, I assume your matthew?

I posted a thing on the blog, but I want to say it here too. If you decide to follow my blog, please send me a message through either the blog or the forums (private messages work) telling me the name you are following under and your username on the forums. Just so I know who to award! Thanks all for the support.