Just a few minor edits needed so far:
p6: under "The Campaign" section; ...that unveils the story... instead of ...that enveils the story... enveils isn't really a proper English word.
p10: a space is needed between entries for Courage and Creativity
P11: a space is needed between entries for Research and Sensors; and also between Sensors and Social Production.
Otherwise its really shaping up nicely. Great job guys.