Quoting DsRaider, reply 9I dislike his comments on the writing. I read a lot of fantasy and play a lot of games and found the writing to be better then average, although some of his other criticisms about balance were accurate.
Completely agree. No, the writing is not at the level of LeGuin (THE best fantasy writer ever, bar none), but it's comparable to what you get from fantasy writers nowadays.
I may have said this in another thread, but IMHO fantasy writing is, in general, not very good. So saying that FE has writing quality on the level of that of most fantasy writing is not exactly a compliment. But I fully admit to being a snob.
The other issue, for me, is that sometimes there are sentences or paragraphs that fall decently far below FE's average quality. They are not that common, and certainly it's a tough job to have so many different bits of unrelated text in there (founding your first city, description of monster X, threat from AI Y, etc.), but when I do read one it leaves more of a negative impression on me than an equally-above-average paragraph would leave a positive impression. (If that makes sense; never said I was a good writer.) It's unfair, but true. If someone were to go through and clean this up, it would make a difference to me.
That said, it certainly doesn't detract from the game in a broader sense. I don't play games for the writing.